The Dreamer's Dream

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    The Dreamer's Dream

    The dreamer dreams of sparkling streams

    Of starry skys and moonlit nights

    Of mountain peeks and grassy hills

    Of prairies grand and valleys of sweetly smelling flowers

    He dreams of bliss and happiness

    Of peace and prosperity

    Of hope and love and leisure life

    And never wants to wake

    The dreamer dreams and dares to dream

    Of a world that is fake

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    guardianangel76 commented on The Dreamer's Dream

    09-14-2011

    ya...well the dreamer fails to realize that he may only dream for a lil while...then reality is here...what will he do with it ?promise another soul that he can give them the moon?...it'll never happen...for he will never be able to be real...for the sake of his dream...lmao
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    SerenityWintirs commented on The Dreamer's Dream

    09-14-2011

    Love, LOVE this one. This is exactly what I was talking about earlier. Beautiful imagery.Pretty words to suck the reader into the piece. The metering could use some work in a few places but overall, this is fantastic
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    stever commented on The Dreamer's Dream

    11-21-2009

    wish i could sleep an dream 4 ever,,love this one,,
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    frazel5 commented on The Dreamer's Dream

    11-19-2009

    ah yes....the lovely world of dreams. So beautiful, but yet, there is the cold reality of waking up. It's a difficult thing, but I think you captured it well. It's very vague, so it can apply to anyone. Awesome job!
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    Rygar commented on The Dreamer's Dream

    11-19-2009

    a very interesting journey through the dreamers eye, only to to be slapped with the cold reality of the waking world. nice job!
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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