one more

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one more

One more cut in the flesh
One more wound to heal the soul
One more useless fleeting breath
One more laugh distant and cold
One more tear
One more smile
One more chear
One more sorrow
One more life
One more dead 

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Tempestlady commented on one more

09-14-2011

Very succinct. Short and sweet. Check out my poem called futility for a different take on the same emotion. Write on..........Tlady

guardianangel76 commented on one more

09-05-2011

I feel this very way...with every word that you say.. love a horrible game.. humans like to play.. and all so perfectly mastered...this insignificant souls... incomplete...soul less bastards told... and found out.. with all their lies...kiss their fucking asses GOODBYE

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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