Feel It In The Wind

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    Dedicated to my new and dear freind shajami.

    Feel It In The Wind

     Let pain die
    Let sorrow sleep
    Let all that plagues us be forgotten
    Cast aside in the whistful wind
    Feel the soft light touch your skin
    Feel the peace within
    Let love warm your cold cold heart
    Let passion fill the void so dark
    Hear the words of the wind
    Let care carress your soul
    Let hope make you whole
    Feel the comfort come in
    Feel your new life begin
    Feel it in the wind

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    Artie commented on Feel It In The Wind

    11-16-2009

    Top notch piece here!!! This is filled with so much energy, that it stirs the soul - 10 from me
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    KristyLoren commented on Feel It In The Wind

    09-06-2009

    Oh this is gorgeous and breathtaking. I could envision each word as you created it. Awesome piece of art. :)
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    ginga commented on Feel It In The Wind

    08-28-2009

    SOLARIS, A beautifully written poem that is such a melody to the ears.The wind is the saving grace here and the hero. The positive and hopefulness here give the poem a dreamy and fantastical quality ginga
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    photochick commented on Feel It In The Wind

    07-29-2009

    great poem solars definitely leaves the reader thinking and pondering alot very beautiful poem great flow each lines goes well the the next felt all of it just beautiful write look forward to reading more of your work you have a grand talent that i will be sure to watch and see it grow even more with each new post
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    Legos12 commented on Feel It In The Wind

    07-29-2009

    Wow, this is beautiful. Very well written, good...um...how do i say it? It raises ideas in my head, as well as images. I like how you took feelings and made them do something physical. That's really neat
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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