Sarah

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  • Emotional
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  • Sweet
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  • Passion
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  • Friendship
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  • Happiness
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  • Erotic
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  • Gentle

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    This ones for you you know who you are

    Sarah

     Sarah's name so sweetly sings
    A song of life it brings
    Her hair so soft smoothly flows
    Down her shoulders it beautifully goes
    Her skin so tender and sweet
    Her lips sweeter than the sweetest rose
    Sarah can be heard in the softly whisping wind
    A sound so beautiful it weekens the knees
    And more beutiful still the sight of her makes my heart skip a beat.

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    HopeOhlarik commented on Sarah

    04-08-2010

    I have to agree with Artie, you got it bad. But somehow I get the feeling that she doesn't want to be with you, like this is almost a plea to her to come back, showing how much you love her. Rambling there I go, don't mind me. Just one different poet's view of the peom. Very well written, again comma usage probably would improve the peice, but it is yours and not mine. Good write, keep it up! Writting helps ease whatever pain you are feeling, I know cause that's why I write. Thanks for the read!
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    Solaris

    06/01/2010

    actualy i wrote the poem for a friend she liked my poetry and asked if i would post one for her so i did theres no real emotion behind it i just kinda wrote whatever poped in my head

    Artie commented on Sarah

    11-16-2009

    Sounds like you got it bad, or oh so good lol - this is such a passionate piece - 10 from me
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    bforibus commented on Sarah

    07-30-2009

    i do love the expression of the writer's feelings. besides a few mis spells it was a good visual emotional loving poem. or longing and lustful.
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    jadienblu commented on Sarah

    07-29-2009

    wow! should i be so flattered as to say, my name might be sarah today...ty
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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