Why are you Gone

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  • Lost Love
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  • Sadness
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  • Loss

    Why are you Gone

    What I miss the most
    Is lyin there next to you
    Wakin up in the morning
    It was just us two
    Now I'm sitting here alone
    Wondering what went wrong
    Why everything I love
    Is there one moment
    And the next I find it gone
    Where are you my love
    Why am I alone
    I've got a full house
    But I haven't got a home
    Why did you have to go

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    SerenityWintirs commented on Why are you Gone

    09-14-2011

    I really like this piece. The rhyming and metering flows pretty smoothly and I like how the poem shifts midway. It goes from making statements about the emotions of the narrator to asking questions of the subject. I think that makes the piece stand out by strengthening the emotion. Especially lines 6-9. Good job!
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    GLUB40 commented on Why are you Gone

    04-07-2010

    yeah that really showed your true feeling pretty well
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    Artie commented on Why are you Gone

    11-16-2009

    This gave me such a feeling of longing and sadness - excellent piece - 10 from me
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    kochab commented on Why are you Gone

    08-18-2009

    I like this one very much sol. Been there mysef many a times. Love is but a rollercoaster, soon youll be back on the up again
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    JadedJezzabel commented on Why are you Gone

    08-18-2009

    a house is an empty shell once the love has gone.........good write
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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