The Letter Before The End

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    This poem i wrote about the last letter a man writes, before he ends his own life, to a woman who chose to not talk to him for, to him, what seemed like eternity because he did something very wrong to her and she had chosen not to recognize that he was human and made a mistake. Simply put. Be careful the damage you cause by giving someone the so called silent treatment instead of giving them another chance to be better.

    The Letter Before The End

    Where I go you can not follow
    The pain of losing you has left me hollow
    Cold and dead inside
    So filled with sorrow I can't even cry.
    I broke you down
    Now you wont speak
    I'm sorry that I was so weak.
    Though what I did
    You didn't deserve
    It did not this cold dead silence earn.
    I went and made myself a better man for you
    But still your silence toward me has yet to end
    So this is the last letter ever I will send.
    I'm sorry my love
    No strength I have left
    For the silence has taken every breath.
    My heart wont heal
    Your silence has left me so bereft
    So now I say my last goodbye
    And warmly embrace the hand of death. 
      
     

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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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