I write...

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    I write...
    I write for you, hoping you'd realize how i feel,
     
    I write hoping you'd see that what i say to you is real, 
    I write openly expressing to you my affection,
    Longing to be near you and feel that connection.
    I write these words for your eyes to behold my heart,
    This feeling of passion that burns from the uttermost part,
    part of my being, my very core, the thought of you
    arousing my,
    arousing my mind, my heart, my soul. Oh hear my cry!
    I write, do you read me?
    I write for you my love, do you feel me? 
    I think of you always when saying my daily prayer,
    hoping one day to be in your presence, oh baby can you hear?
    Hear the cries of my heart, longing for you near.
    I write for you my love, i hope one day you'd see,
    my life is incomplete right now, for without you  there's 
    no me. 

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    gogant commented on I write...

    11-02-2010

    She wrote a poem, and he heard her heart....she sang a song of love, and he breathed in her love...............Beautiful.................g
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    sweetchinee

    11/04/2010

    thank u...

    Phoenix9 commented on I write...

    11-02-2010

    Right from the heart, full of feeling, feelings needed to be filled, need to be a complete person as only love can do, a great write Sweet
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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