Angry words

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    Angry words

     He's so angry when he talks to me,
    tone changes, to rough ranges,
    relentlessly he comes at me,
    angry words flow easily.
    Why is he so mad at ME?
    sure i might not be perfect, but are his actions justified?
    i get hurt and angry sometimes
    but all these things i try to hide.
    are u gonna ground me AGAIN daddy?
    are you gonna punish me?
    and for a second i forget my identity am i a BABY or his LADY?
    COULD SOMEONE PLEASE CLARIFY THAT FOR ME!!!!
    he scolds me like a hardened child, angry words he would repeat
    and of course it all ends in my retreat. 

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    toredbloodink commented on Angry words

    02-20-2017

    To retreat is not a loss it's a gain of physical freedom.. One can only be held down so long.. It's like getting to that age when you leave your parents... Then you get a room mate... Then you get a mate, then when all else fails you have God and the vessel He made you to be... Grow wings and fly fly as high as you wish... Great write super enriched in raw emotion.....
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    truth917 commented on Angry words

    05-01-2010

    Wow! that was deep ma.. Sounds of sadness and heartache. I'm speechless but it was well put
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    FranzJ commented on Angry words

    04-14-2010

    there are all kinda of abuse - besides physical - - - - - - -
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