You're so....

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    You're so....

     You're soooo sweet i could almost taste you,
    Make me feel so lovely, I just wanna embrace you.
    I love the way you refer to me as beautiful,
    I mean it's not the first time but from you its
    meaningful.
    I love our accent and your words, the way they
    comfort me,
    It makes me feel like there's no place you'd rather be,
    than with me, just hanging around enjoying
    each others company,
    content with my presence and content with me. 

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    smoothdame commented on You're so....

    10-29-2010

    I thought that this poem was nice it was sweet and innocent the way love should be I thought it was well written.
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    sweetchinee

    11/04/2010

    thank you very much i appreciate you reading... hopefully u find more that u like as i add some more...

    Sx9 commented on You're so....

    10-28-2010

    may be you can if you push your fire and let it burn for a second,for this is not love , it is just the side kick of friendship,companion when will you let him know love blooms and that is you,,love the way you turn and twist and cant say love for all these things he said you already know,,great penship in disguise ,,
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    sweetchinee

    10/28/2010

    ha ha ha...i guess it is... funny u read me well... thanks for the comment Sx9

    Sx9

    10/29/2010

    yes i know,lol,,funny right,,

    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on You're so....

    10-28-2010

    I like this straight and to the point that you appreciate your man's attention and presence. Well done...............E
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