Missing You

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    Missing You

    I woke for a moment on a
    cold dark night.
    Thinking of you, but you
    were no where in sight.
    I feel your strong warm arms
    caressing my body.
    I see your curious green eyes
    staring at me oddly.
    I reach over to run my lonely fingers
    through your dusty brown hair.
    Only to realize that you're not there.
    My heart fills with sorrow,
    while my head wishes for tomorrow.

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    jenifer commented on Missing You

    05-30-2009

    in a way that explains my life never being able to have long for long . and never having it the way i need.

    nosyrosy81 commented on Missing You

    02-17-2009

    good one.....like it

    joker88 commented on Missing You

    02-17-2009

    Yes you were right, very similar in meaning.

    riceryder commented on Missing You

    02-17-2009

    short but sweet great job

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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