Come With Me

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    Come With Me

    Come flee with me
     from this barren land
    Close your eyes
    and take my hand
    shy whispers of wind
    will show us the way
    taunting the butterflies
    to come out and play
    following the whispers
    so quiet and shy
    watching the stars dance
    across the night sky
    We will run through this land
    so encased with death
    when we reach the forest floor
    there will be time for a breath
    Feeling the energy radiate
     from the ground
    Encased with the comfort
    of the life all around
    Letting your hand
     slip quietly from mine
    Knowing that here
     every thing will be fine
    Stepping quietly
    as not to wake the trees
    the ones watching us
    silently, protecting what be
    Feel the energy
    flowing through your soul
    My place full of life
    again we are whole
    come walk with me
    in this plush land
    My land that hasn't been
    poluted or destroyed by man
    I will walk with you side by side
    standing tall no fear to hide
    A smile on my face
    and telling you true
    I have made it this far
    only because of you

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    ginga commented on Come With Me

    08-09-2009

    EE, I find this a serne poem yo read since there is so much good to come from reading it. The relationship here man vs nature is welll put and the love between the couple is very uplifting. Thanks for a great read for me this am. ginga
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    ArizonaPlay commented on Come With Me

    08-04-2009

    It's as if I can feel your energy as i read this and it took me by surprise I am truley moved by your expressed emotions......
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    gogant commented on Come With Me

    08-02-2009

    I sometimes feel there is a hidden entity within the twines and ferns that play silently among the forest's domain. You seem to feel this too. A wonderful work it is. Thanx
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    optimistic commented on Come With Me

    07-31-2009

    yes great description and flow to a true nature poem for the cause this is great and really worth the time to read.
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    dragonfly1023 commented on Come With Me

    07-31-2009

    thanks EvilEyes, a perfect addition to the growing P.O.E.T.S. collection. great thoughts on the purity of the soul in relationship to the impurities of nature caused by man.
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    EvilEyes

    07/31/2009

    Thank you I beleive strongly in the mission of P.O.E.T.S. and the need to get the word out.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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