Recurring Nightmare...Revisited

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This is another 9/11 poem i wrote a while back...

Recurring Nightmare...Revisited


Visions keep flashing
Before my eyes.
My mind keeps rehashing,
Clear blue skies.
Planes keep crashing,
Into building sides.
Voices keep asking,
For reasons why.

Media speculation,
Terrorist ties.
Instant devastation,
Lives paralyzed.
Military hesitation?
Rumors denied.
Immediate Retaliation.
Maneuvers formalized.

People falling,
Victimized,
Cries of forsaking,
Terrified.
Glass keeps breaking,
Horrified.
Jihad keeps taking,
Glorified.

Body's keep falling,
Just like flies,
Buildings keep crumbling,
Compromised.
Children keep asking,
Who survived?
God's second remaking,
You decide?

Apparitions walking,
Hypnotised.
Staring, not talking,
Mesmerized.
Ghostly illusions,
Vaporized.
Prideful contusions,
Cauterized.

Time keeps changing,
With anguished tides.
Years contemplating.
Revenge or Suicide.
Mental whip lashings,
Deep down inside.
Faces keep passing,
Hauntingly by.

Politicians keep masking,
Truth and lies.
War keeps lasting,
Youth genocide?
People keep asking,
Proof still denied.
Terrorists keep basking,
In rueful pride.

Sooner or later,
They'll open their eyes.
See who's been awake.
And who hypnotized.
They'll see what's at stake,
Then realize,
It's been a bad dream,
One we'd like to deny.
Eight years of bad memories, burning inside.
A recurring nightmare in a blurry disguise.


Copyright © September 2009
Kevin Mooney

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MindNumbing commented on Recurring Nightmare...Revisited

09-13-2010

I will never be able to escape those vivid images that play out in my head of the people walking out of that nightmare wrapped in blankets, covered in soot, and completely dazed. Survival must have been more devasting, at least for a moment, than being one of the fallen. This is outstanding, K... a truly beautiful dedication. Thank you for sharing.

MrGee commented on Recurring Nightmare...Revisited

09-12-2010

The rhyme is well placed in the poem. I also enjoyed the story you painted into this work. a 10

Rhymer commented on Recurring Nightmare...Revisited

09-12-2010

I like the style and the rhyme flows well and reads well, a tribute to one of the darkest days in America's history.

Teardrops commented on Recurring Nightmare...Revisited

09-11-2010

Your talent as a poet is shown in this write it takes skill and passion to write this way thank you for building a shirne in words to honor the ones who died Marie

kmooney

09/11/2010

Thank you so much Marie. I always appreciate your comments...Kevin

cheronld commented on Recurring Nightmare...Revisited

09-11-2010

WOW..WOW..WOW....This is so much more than just awesome..you have managed to pen the thoughts, images, and feelings of this day in history....I for one can't thank you enough for writing this piece...it touches on so much and makes my heart swell....BRAVO....BRAVO....Cher

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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