Single Acrostic
S olo always sad and soloI nvisible; never seen
N o one to share no one to care
G rotesquely unaccompanied
L onely, so lonely, so very alone
E verlasting, unfulfilled longing
Single Acrostic
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I nvisible; never seen
N o one to share no one to care
G rotesquely unaccompanied
L onely, so lonely, so very alone
E verlasting, unfulfilled longing
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fluffybunniezz commented on Single Acrostic
10-20-2012
- I'm discovering that I really like acrostics. Anyway, I thought the form was nice, the wording was appropriate for the tone of the poem, and the theme was quite literally spelled out for me. I would make changes to the second to last line, as the statement "I'm lonely" could be worded differently, more effectively keeping the reader's attention.
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