South Mountain

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    • speed11935
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    South Mountain

    Cacti and creosote everywhere

    The sun shines with unstoppable glare

    The trails run crooked here and there

    I stroll along without a care

     

    Acacia, palo verde  and ironwood

    Put me in a wistful mood

    I would not change it if I could

    It all makes me feel so good

     

    Ravines run off the mountain side

    Snakes and javelinas in them hide

    This is there home, where they abide

    I plan to stay on their good side

     

    The breeze whips up a mist of sand

    Then falls to dust on the prairie land

    The majestic hills, ah so grand

    Formed by God’s artistic hand

     

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    jademelissa74 commented on South Mountain

    07-16-2009

    The serenity offered is well coveted from this technology-infested room. What I would give to be in the midst of a majestic hill! A wonderfully created piece! Great Job!

    wheelsal commented on South Mountain

    07-06-2009

    This is a wonderful portrait of nature at its best. NIce write.............................................

    ginga commented on South Mountain

    07-06-2009

    GREAT IMAGES AND IT GIVES ME A GLANCE OF A PART OF THE COUNTRY i HAVE NOT VISITED. Thanks. Ginga

    tierra7 commented on South Mountain

    07-06-2009

    Loved It!! such an exquisite write..your poetry brings the tapestry of our creator ,alive...

    BDIsernhagen commented on South Mountain

    06-24-2009

    I love a good nature poem, and they are a rare find here. Thank you for posting! [great last stanza, BTW]

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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