THE OLD YELLOW HOUSE ON THE HILL

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    THE OLD YELLOW HOUSE ON THE HILL

    THE OLD YELLOW HOUSE ON THE HILL

    My old house upon the hill
    I know it's still standing there still
    Now it's covered with white siding
    THe old yellow paint nicely hiding

    Out back is the gigantic spruce tree
    From its lofty heights forever I could see
    Eight pear trees we also had
    I loved to climb them when I was a lad

    A goldfish pond from an old sink was made
    Around its edge I often played
    A long sloping yard at the house's side
    Made a nice place on a sled to slide

    Plenty of grass we had to mow
    With the old push mower, it went kind of slow
    Working in our garden of vegetables and flowers
    Often filled my summer hours

    A fireplace and a flag pole stand
    Made from rock and cement by my mother's hand
    A second-hand bike is what I rode
    And a flexible flyer after it snowed

    These are the things I recall with ease
    These are the pleasant memories
    But all was not rosy on Montague St.
    Life was not all happy and sweet

    The house was at least one hundred years old
    The second one in the area I was told
    In the unfinished cellar one could see frayed wire
    I was ever afraid we would catch on fire.

    To imply all was great was not my intent
    Home was where many lonely hours were spent
    Seldom did my friends play with me there
    We ALWAYS seemed to go elsewhere

    Missing was a devoted Dad
    That I saw all my friends had
    I suppose to others I seemed happy outside
    But in my soul I'd already died

    I guess if I have to tell the truth
    For the most part I had a happy youth
    And it still gives me a little thrill
    To remember the old yellow house on the hill

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    ArgusWayne commented on THE OLD YELLOW HOUSE ON THE HILL

    10-14-2009

    This sure took me back to my old house, although it was in the flatlands and was actually unpainted, with honeysuckle vines growing up the front of it. Thanks for the memories! Great poem!

    wheelsal commented on THE OLD YELLOW HOUSE ON THE HILL

    07-06-2009

    Oh nostalgia and it comes more and more with each passing year. Loved reading this.................

    ginga commented on THE OLD YELLOW HOUSE ON THE HILL

    07-06-2009

    The reminiscent quality of this poem is grand. I love the snippet of your past that you reveal here. Nice piece! ginga

    mlea commented on THE OLD YELLOW HOUSE ON THE HILL

    06-11-2009

    I could tell all the regular stuff about timing and phrasing and such, you have it,but more important... you have taken me back to my own "yellow house" and I thank you for the ride....mlea

    speed11935

    06/11/2009

    glad u liked it. Mine was in Arlington, MA

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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