White Knights & Earth Angels

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    This poem is for my dearest friend, confidant, and "partner in crime." We have spent many hours on the telephone but I haven't seen him for thirty years.

    White Knights & Earth Angels

    I have a white knight who knows my name,

    He never forgot that we're so much the same,

    And thoughts of his jokes in my silly old brain,

    I guess I'll just go and dance in the rain!

     

    If there was an angel on earth it is You,

    To watch over my soul, and I know that you do,

    And should life deny my eyes with your pleasure,

    I'll always behold I've received quite a treasure.

     

    Though we are apart and so far away,

    Your thoughts they are with me, and I feel that you pray,

    This Texas Earth Angel survives one more day,

    To give what she's got, for God made her that way.

     

    So if you e'r wonder in your pondering soul,

    If your life has arrived at its long searched for goal,

    Remember Earth Angel smiles up at the stars,

    Thinking of knights on their dragons who rescue from far.

     

    I'll never forget you my sweetheart so true,

    Your heart is quite golden, yes, Mo, that is you,

    Wherever life takes us, you always shall be,

    A prince and a poet, and a friend just for me.

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    GUSTY commented on White Knights & Earth Angels

    07-28-2010

    THIS TENDER WORK OF YOURS IS FULLY-DONE! NOTHING ABOUT IT IS MISSING TO RENDER IT INCOMPLE- TE FOR THOSE WHO KNOW HOW TO HANDLE LOVE! I STILL WONDER HOW I WITHSTOOD SOME KIND OF AMOROUS NOSTALGIA AS IF IT WAS ALL MEANT FOR ME! EXCELLENT WORK,TEXASWRITER!!!
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    Teardrops commented on White Knights & Earth Angels

    07-06-2010

    You did it again made me cry this poem touches me . I too have lost a loved one and wait for the dragon slayer to come for me . Great write my firend loved it Marie
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    texaswriter

    07/07/2010

    Thank the good Lord above that this site is an outlet for us to reach out and touch someone with His love and understanding. We are not alone, Marie, there are so many of us out there just like us; lost and broken pieces of a puzzle that will never be complete in our lifetimes. Thank God that we shall be reunited on the other side. But until then, let's wipe our tears and wash our faces and live for today. We shall not pass by this time again. "Life is short. Get the shoes!" [Hallmark card] Jackie Marie

    Teardrops

    07/07/2010

    jackie i will meet you at the door hallmark has nothing over you Marie

    dahlusion commented on White Knights & Earth Angels

    07-06-2010

    this poetic gem is laced with top-notch rhymes and imagery. bravo!!
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    texaswriter

    07/06/2010

    Thank you so much for your critique and evaluation of my poem. We poets see things in our minds and then try to get that picture across to our audience in a poetic format. I can see that I did my job. Much appreciation for your encouragement!

    Crush commented on White Knights & Earth Angels

    07-04-2010

    PLEASE DON't TAKE THIS THE WRONG WAY : this reminds me of a Hallmark Card. "to watch over my soull, and i know that you do" really touched me....this is beautiful and touching like some of those hallmark cards. but, this is not a halmark card because it was not written in generic catch all recipients. this mo person is /was special and i love the tribute. thank you. 9
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    texaswriter

    07/04/2010

    If it reminds you of a Hallmark Card, I am flattered and amazed! Thank you for sharing your observations with me. My communications skills must be improving. LOL!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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