A Summer's Day!

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My Inspiration for this poem is lifes variety colors.

A Summer's Day!

Soft sensations brushed my cheek's
The afternoon breeze came to comfort me
As my shadow stood at my side

The hands of time continued on bye
Ticking the seconds into minutes, then hours
Pocketing memories later required

children make believe every impossibility
To exists and who could resist
Their hunt for  buried treasure or mermaid adventures

As they pranced around their green blankets
Admiring the many colorful heads
Popping up from the flowery beds
 
The adults came to wonder how
 Their love for life had plundered

Mr sun beamed rays of love
Feeding our bright desires
Coating us all in warm attire

Floating fluffy and white
The clouds sent their wishes
To join the barbeques and picnics
Ruining their fun and many appetizing dishes

They had enjoyed loved ones company for awhile To treasure their laughs and smiles
Thou that day didn't go quite as well 
As they had hoped it
Each and every moment
went just how it was suppose to

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Beetle726 commented on A Summer's Day!

11-25-2009

Beautifully done! No shadow from these words. You truely have come out of any shadow that may have surrounded you. Well written, well said. Hope you check out and comment on some of my work.

WCman100 commented on A Summer's Day!

06-06-2009

It starts out like you were feeling lonely, with your shadow at your side, but then it turns into a very pleasant poem. Great writing!

optimistic commented on A Summer's Day!

06-04-2009

I love them type days where everything goes as more than planned. Kids are something else to think over things that could be so negative and make them postive and push you to feel the same you have to love there sense of freedom. I enjoyed how you brought out the memory of your day well written.

Tray4

06/05/2009

Thanks

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

Tray4’s Poems (45)

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Recovery 0
2021 1
Invisible Enemy 1
Beyond 0
Weight 3
Sibling Rivalry 1
The Kindly Gardeners 2
Invisible Prison 4
A Summer's Day! 3
Deceived 4
Pulse 2
Stallion 2
"The Wind In My Soul" 10
Eternity 3
Candle Sticks 4
Natural Beauty 4
Pigment 1
Precious Moment 1
Ready 1
Temporary Destractions 2
The Exchange 5
The missing feathers 2
True Expression 4
Unstable 1
A Reminder 2
"Soul mates" 4
A good winter's week end 1
Only for so long 2
"Best Friend's" 2
"Whole" 1
Release 3
Little lights scatter the darkness 2
" ! A New Year ! " 2
Unbosom (a poem I had on poetry.com) 2
Alluring Decor 1
Corruption Unveiled 3
Wait don't flip ya lid get ur hair did 3
I think I need the question 4
I Can`t Explain 2
"You and I" 7
Find freedom -10
The Man She could not leave behind,an Intro 3
untitled 2
Genuine Exhibitions 10
Dusk Arriving 9