Temporary Destractions

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    Temporary Destractions

    Purely Repetitious
    My mind wanders
    through the spaces in time
    Recklessly winding
    to spiral out of control
    Blowing through the curves
    Spurs of hope
    to mend the frazzled seems
    beams of pretending to relate
    to the conditions set before me
    Trying to focus
    but the stings are binding those
    tired weary attempts
    Fear biers no retreat
    only constant repeats into thee unknown
    Spiritually descending
    Not comprehending the truth
    is a lose all of it's own
    A book mark to seal the real deal
    A future torn from this existence
    Pierced for my Transgressions
    His blessings beyond what I dare to compare

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    subtleNuance commented on Temporary Destractions

    06-28-2009

    work a bit on the spelling, eye think the reader my tumble over unsuspected werds that may knot bee the once ewe intended. be ee cummings if you want and skip the capitalization (if you want). the content is powerful

    Tray4

    06/28/2009

    I find your comment funny ,when obviously your spelling is way off.(lol)There is more than one meaning for alot of words and it is what is. Thanks for the comment.

    Tray4

    06/28/2009

    Fyi the spelling is all correct. Is this a joke of some sort?

    origionalmerlin commented on Temporary Destractions

    04-05-2009

    one victory was all that was ever needed.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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