I Can`t Explain

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    I Can`t Explain

    The sorrow that seeps
    Torment running deep
    The plains extend lifeless
    Defiled they lay empty for miles and miles
    Scorched with the flames of anger and betrayal
    Accursed their drowning in fear
    Beware
    Beware
    They cry
    Continuing to deny the truth
    Their counterfeit smiles droop
    Left with none to comfort but one
    Yet him they constantly ignore, bitter to the core
    Naive they remain spiritualy poor

    Until I can explain
    A heavenly erruption intervenes
    Many hearts become torn at the seams
    Bleeding corruption
    With an ultimate distruption death dies
    All the while a mighty transfusion births life
    A dove carries love on his wings
    To crush all those yesterday's and their painful stings
    Causing the soul to relax
    In a great mass tears pour
    Tears of wondrous joy
    No longer relying on oneself
    Eternal friendship spouts
    Now abiding together
    Peace is resurrected
    Unrivalled you are still you
    Howbeit you are hereupon you anew

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    kdarcy commented on I Can`t Explain

    04-27-2009

    Good idea and concept, maybe a tad long for what you have to say, some great word combos, I like it ... rewrites are very hard, with or without other peoples suggestions. Hang in there and keep it up, I have the same problems.

    origionalmerlin commented on I Can`t Explain

    03-30-2009

    condense and simplify for those with limited attention span and vocab, i get it but...

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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