Precious Moment

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  • Childhood
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  • Love
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  • Happiness

    Poem Commentary

    New life what a great experience :)

    Precious Moment
    Loving presence
    Peace and happiness
    lacking nothing
    Bright light
    Floating and no desire for the unknown
    Knowing not time
    Good and evil nonexistent
    Soon to see her face
    Her to hold me in her arms
    Smiling as the tears run down
    and joy fills her heart
    Another small miracle
    This to be called my birthday!

    P.S. A distant memory

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    origionalmerlin commented on Precious Moment

    04-05-2009

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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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