Eternity

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  • Devotion

    Eternity
    I dream of the day when I lie
    on pillows of green meadow
    looking over the still waters beyond
    as a cool breeze sweeps across my smile
    peace warms me with a gentle presence
    time sits still to admire
    his glory in everlasting measure
    pure beauty framing all existence

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    Clementinewoods commented on Eternity

    07-06-2009

    Wow!!! I could feel this poem as I was reading it. It may be short but it is so deep and so beautiful!!! Thank you for sharing such a powerful piece of art. You are a great writer. Keep up the good work. I would also like to invite you to share in my work. God bless!!!
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    origionalmerlin commented on Eternity

    05-07-2009

    looks at the rating... .. looks at comments, well when the ratings system changes soon the invisable low raters will have to comment and the writers get a choice to respond, to comments and ratings. and the option to not have their writings exposed in the arena of chaos... (huggs)
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    origionalmerlin commented on Eternity

    04-05-2009

    awwww haiku or serenyu wordchoice hammers out great image(S)
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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