The Exchange

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    The Exchange
    Deep blue oceans of words never spoken
    Peaking fears mountains
    Thoughts pouring like fountains
    In the midst I find deep brown emotion
    Taming my hearts standard
    A glance into a moment
    Silent in time Immersed in enchantment
    Knowing more
    than could ever be conversed
    Looking just to behold
    a glimmer of hope
    The exchange of two souls
    Knowing there is a deference
    A reason for existence
    No explanation
    Without complication
    Our eyes connected

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    wheelsal commented on The Exchange

    08-10-2009

    So much unsaid, so any things left to say. This intrigues me. Nice write. A new friend, Sally
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    HarverTomsson commented on The Exchange

    08-10-2009

    If only I knew what deep brown meant to you! Such subtle nuances...Good stuff from start to finish.
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    subtleNuance commented on The Exchange

    06-28-2009

    GREAT poem, begging for part two (maybe "the day before" the wedding, "a day frosted by white" wedding day, "saturday" near the end, and finally "sunday", the day the sun didn't shine)
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    origionalmerlin commented on The Exchange

    05-07-2009

    still worth more than !0.
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    origionalmerlin commented on The Exchange

    04-05-2009

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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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