autumn

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    autumn

    Leaves that fall swooping down
    colors of red's and yellow's mixing
    with orange's and brown's
    swirling and creating a wirl-wind
    or color
    The chill of the wind in a gentle
    breeze
    Laying on the leaf covered ground
    watching extolled by the colors
    the setting sun compliments the very
    day its self, golden light roaming
    over the multi-colored trees the
    last light of the day covers the ground
    of autumn's rein with a
    blanket of gold as bright
    as the sun its self

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    winterkou commented on autumn

    12-23-2010

    I see that I already coemmnted on thsi write, but this is a fave time of yr for me all the beautiful colors and nice cool weather. Its such a wonderful time.

    winterkou commented on autumn

    02-26-2010

    Another nice descriptive write- i like writing about natures beauty, very suttle and calm.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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