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over and over i try and try

but it seems your needs i cant satisfy

it seems no matter what i do

nothing will ever be enough for you

 

i hide my pain between the lies

so that way you don't have to try

to understand the pain i feel

and all my wounds that need to heal

 

though i grasp upon every hope

that one day you wont be so cold

one day i wont be so weak

that day i might just let you see

 

let you see,

this hidden side of me

this side no one truely see's

they always see the actress me

 

the cover i use to hide the pain

act? facade? their both the same

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girlygirl1234 commented on hide

05-27-2011

wow...all i can say is wow that is truly an mazing poem. you put everything into this poem and it was marvelous...good write!....GG

amithissecret

06/09/2011

thanks!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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