broken dreams

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okay i think I'm going to stick to songs for a while. this is my latest called broken dreams as said above for all who read comment and vote, thanks a bunch it really motivates me in my writing. love ~heather

broken dreams

Broken dreams

hidden lies

fitful nightmares every night

do you see what you’ve done to me

can you hear my silent screams

 

do you understand

how much I need you to take my hand

and tell me everything’s alright

to help me get through every night

 

but you just walked away

left me cold and all alone

as I watched you walk away

how could you leave this story untold

 

no guilt nor love

left in your eyes

my body emotionless and frozen cold

how could you just let me go

 

sometimes I wonder if

it was I who stooped so low

yet as I think more about it

how are you not frozen cold

 

heart so cold and icy

I'm amazed your not frozen in place

yet as I think more about it

maybe now I can be warm and safe

 

 

through all your lies

at least I tried

I held back the tears

that I now cry

 

through all the hurt

you threw at me

I’ll be okay

cause it seems there’s nothing else I can be

 

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Chrisjan commented on broken dreams

07-21-2019

Oh yes, been in this scene more than twice !! I pray your heart is mended, no scares, only hazy memories. It is hard to fit in to a world, that is becoming blind. Trust in your heart. Ask Christ Jesus for a direction. And hope you pick the right path. Took me 32 years. Honest !! I truly like your pen name or ID. I am glad you liked my poem Peace.

deathbysociety commented on broken dreams

07-10-2011

very nice. i like the poems/songs format, it flowed so easily.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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