i wont let you go

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  • Love Distance

    i wont let you go
    why do you have to leave my love
    i dont want you to go
    you told me so but now i see
    that we were not ment to be frends but lovers
    i want you to stay dont go
    dont me leave me alone
    i want to stay with you
    now i relize this but its to late
    your going leaving
    for a long time still
    i miss you already though you havent even left
    dont go dont leave my love
    i love you but i didnt relize it till now
    please dont leave 
    please stay with me
    i love you i want you
    i wish you didnt have to go
    i dont want to let you go
    my heat is breaking
    that you have to leave
    but i love you so much
    if you go then please come back
    please please
    i....love....you
    i wont let you go if i have to make you stay dont leave me
    dont leave me
    DONT LEAVE ME
    I WONT LET YOU GO

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    scrye commented on i wont let you go

    08-30-2009

    amithis an emotionally packed poem with so much to say. Beautiful poem and a powerfully written cry out for love. A great read thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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    Phoenix9 commented on i wont let you go

    08-21-2009

    if one truely loves and leaves they will return. but it's not the end if they don't, write about it , use your feelings but don't plead or beg, there will be others, life is too short for there not to be
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    bluewolf commented on i wont let you go

    08-19-2009

    Such a debth of love exprssed in poetic verse from one so young. However always remember this-love that holds depth for both will create a lasting love: immortal love.
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    Troubador commented on i wont let you go

    08-19-2009

    Honey you are such a young thing there will be many other guys in your life. Don't worry about a flash in the pan, there always be another.
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    cliftondurant commented on i wont let you go

    08-19-2009

    love is beautiful it is wonderful to be in love make sure he love you nice poem
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