remembrance

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    remembrance
    gotta go gotta get away
    the only thing i need to take
    is your love the years pass by
    but you stay clearer in my mind
    because in my remembrance
    we are young
    in my remembrance
    we're together forever
    but that's only in my remembrance
    leaving the past behind
    but somehow
    always keeping you in mind
    loving life but life
    is sad without you
    but in my remembrance we love each other
    in my remembrance
    love grows like wild flowers
    is sweet like a moon beam catching in a honeysuckle
    though that's only in my remembrance

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    JayJ420 commented on remembrance

    06-15-2010

    ahhh the memory is the one valued gift we all have and share....
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    Musicmynded1 commented on remembrance

    03-30-2010

    I fully agree with bluewolf.... a great song it could be indeed.
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    1990lh commented on remembrance

    10-30-2009

    beautifully written indeed, that is what we all most do to keep what is gone alive in our hearts where it lives forever, and i love the lines "love grows like wild flowers is sweet like a moon beam catching in a honeysuckle though that's only in my remembrance" very nice
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    bluewolf commented on remembrance

    08-19-2009

    Beautifully written and with a bit of work would make an equally compelling song.
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    amber12172 commented on remembrance

    07-28-2009

    I hope your love life gos really good for you. I love your poem. It is touching and amazing. :)
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    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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