I'm not your princess any more

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  • Prince And Princess Never

    I'm not your princess any more

     i guess this is how it ends
    i guess i was never close enough to stop this
    for your words do not phase me like they should 
    my prince we are not meant to be
    for im not your princess any more 
    you lied to me you betrayed me
    my trust in you was lost so now...
    good bye my love 
    i once would have done any thing for you
    but then my sister claims that you were down at that woman's house
    you said she was nothing
    you said you loved only me
    well now my prince....
    runaway to her go tell her all the things you told me
    but be prepared because not everyone is who they seem
    i know this all to well
    im not your princess any more
    she is but i just hope she realises that your not who you seem to be
    you are destructive
    but let her find out its her choice
    i leave you now to let you be with your princess
    my prince you where never worthy of my love so
    go... run to her... let her comfort you
    but remember this my prince
    IM NOT YOUR PRINCESS ANY MORE!!!!!!!!!

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    frazel5 commented on I'm not your princess any more

    10-31-2009

    This was a good read. I can feel the hurt in your words. I would suggest you work on your spelling and grammer. You have talent, now just tweak it a little bit and you'll take this poem from good to great. Good job!
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    bluewolf commented on I'm not your princess any more

    08-19-2009

    The poem is deeply expressive of the betrayl of love lost. My suggestion are to work on grammer. Good poem otherwise.
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    slohan4u commented on I'm not your princess any more

    08-06-2009

    i feel sorry for the princess of this poem. very good poem.
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    scrye commented on I'm not your princess any more

    08-06-2009

    Very deep amithis, soo much pain i am so sorry, but the one who truely deserves a love such as this is still out there and when the time is right you will meet. This I know. Great poem with lots of emotion. Good work.
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    HopeOhlarik commented on I'm not your princess any more

    08-06-2009

    i can feel the hurt emmiting from the words. i know that feeling. and all i can say is it will get better. great poem!
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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