honeysuckle

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to my favorite flower sweet and blissful lol hope you like it

honeysuckle

in the night I'm cold 
the moonlight shines silver
and i inhale the smell of honeysuckle
so sweet and ginger in the night
it absorbs the moonlight
sweetening the smell and flavor of the
breathtaking flower
silver light shines through the trees 
illuminating the conferences of the night
mysteriously lighting the dark and my heart
midnight moon shines bright
i take a flower in my hand
smelling the sent of it draw by it
extolled by the simple dew drop,
shining as a crystal pure and new
sipping the sweet nectur i smile hiding in my world of bliss 

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winterkou commented on honeysuckle

12-23-2010

I love how you describe the flower how sweet and enoyjable you present it to the reader. so descriptive, good write.

CindyBettinger commented on honeysuckle

07-05-2010

I truly enjoy the imagery/emotion of a scent absorbing the flavor of moonlight - what beauty!

ForeverPoet commented on honeysuckle

06-27-2010

wow. for such a young poet, this was well written. excellent word flow and verse. I think you will become an amazing poet. keep up the good work. looking forward to many more~~~~~~~~~~~~~F~~

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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