leader of the stairwell

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    leader of the stairwell
    in a dream there is a stairwell
    to love passion and the future
    but the girl that gards is who is she
    she is the leader of the stairwell
    to one who lives and breathes like with the stairwell
    the land is dark and misty
    ut the stairwell is gold and sliver and has jewels imeded into it
    swirls of crimson the sky the color of sunset
    " welcome to the relm of dreams"
    she said voice like the soung of water running over rocks in a creek
    so sweet and soft
    she walks over to me
    "come i will take you only to the top of the stairs from there you will find your dream."
    I walk behind her and think 'who is she? is she a goddess?'
    "no im not a goddess but im the leader of the stairwell"
    i walk up the steps and in to a dream 


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    Musicmynded1 commented on leader of the stairwell

    03-30-2010

    Seems that your poems may keep me coming back for more,,, not too many writers on here are beaconing me like the ones you're putting down.. good job.
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    dumplin commented on leader of the stairwell

    10-31-2009

    There are a few errors in this that could be corrected. This is a lovely piece, though. I'd love to read like the next one where you describe the dream itself.
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    Phoenix9 commented on leader of the stairwell

    08-21-2009

    very good concept, i enjoyed the read. but my only crit. is spelling. ok,
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    amithissecret

    08/21/2009

    never been the best speller srry but its who i am

    daddybabydaisy commented on leader of the stairwell

    08-06-2009

    this is beautiful. ur so talented and i think u are a great writer.
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    slohan4u commented on leader of the stairwell

    08-06-2009

    very good poem. sounds like dreams i had when i was young/ keep writing more poems.
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