last love

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    last love

     looking over the crystal sea
    I feel your breath next to me
    crystalline tears that scatter the fall
    shatter like glass like a crystalline ball
    no shining light comes from the moon to be
    a sad smile crosses as you lay next to me
    with one last breath you to me " I'll love you always, for eternity"

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    sawdust commented on last love

    05-04-2011

    oh this is beautiful and so close to my heart you have a gift at writting with such feeling im envious you go girl
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    ForeverPoet commented on last love

    06-27-2010

    short but moving and to the point! well done you will have a good following i believe. and make many people think!
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    KING commented on last love

    05-22-2010

    I like it! Passionate, sweet and to the point! This is how its done. :)
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    nanoboy909 commented on last love

    05-22-2010

    wow this is a good one.... i like it.... its short but it has a deep message....
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    stever commented on last love

    05-21-2010

    very good write sorta sad but lovely.......read me somtime....ty StEvEr
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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