Can We Stay

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    Can We Stay
    Baby I
    I hate to see you cry
    I didn't want to believe you
    I know I shouldn't leave you
    Where is there left to go
    No more sorrow
    No remorse
    Just a day and a tomorrow
    When the life that lives is so endless
    And breathless
    But because of you
    The song plays
    And the voices say
    To just reach out
    And take my hand
    I'll lead you astray
    And we, us 3 can stay

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    icu2 commented on Can We Stay

    11-16-2009

    The last of this poem sounds rather insane....pulling the reader in....this is wonderful, and powerful when the writer does this. I think your story is there...tell us more, darlin. Great write!
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    SammyBoo21

    11/19/2009

    thank you for reading my poetry. its nice to hear people enjoy it.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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