Soul Of A Stripper

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    Soul Of A Stripper

    She knocks down a couple drinks
    And looses herself on the pole
    The way she looks, she's lost her soul
    In her mind, she's the best
    She put all the other girls to the test
    Neither one of them had the time
    To think in their minds, jealous minds
    That this woman does not belong here
    But yet, she still smiled through all her tears
    I was that woman
    That was my world
    I'd shake a dance and twirl
    Oh God, it made me want to hurl
    But I did it, and got fitted
    Going up and down that pole
    And I should have known
    That I was better
    Than that of those girls
    I didn't have to be there and promote my body
    But the thing is, you think to yourself
    That you do it for one thing and one thing only
    But without that one thing,
    Your soul and your world is lonely
    And you are nothing

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    Ceasar commented on Soul Of A Stripper

    12-08-2010

    Great job, and thank you for being transparent-not a lot of people would take the time to share of their personal business because of shame, but this is how we help each other/heal each other-we learn from the past experiences/mistakes of others. Don't belittle yourself because of what you did in the past-sometimes we do things we shouldn't do-its a part of life-which allows us to trust and depend on God more-because it is He we turn to, whenever we become bogged in lifes' turmoils.
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    SammyBoo21

    01/24/2011

    Yes. And there sre some who are too stubborn and hard hearted to do so and they try to flee this life insteasd of making it better by fully accepting God and walking in His daily walk. What he wants us to do. All are sinful and fall short of the glory of God but He is there to pick us up. And send us back on our merry ways. But only right by Him. You are a true brother. I am glad to have met you and can write to you.

    FranzJ commented on Soul Of A Stripper

    11-15-2009

    life can make you do harsh things - i worked 2 jobs and wasaway from hone a lot - with a wife and 3 daughters- thankfully you are oast all of that - keep writing please
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    SammyBoo21

    02/01/2010

    yes, but it didnt "make" me do it. i did want to, but after i did it, i will never ever go back. im sorry to know ur family missed you a lot. i used to always work 2 jobs at a time. its hard. especially when you got family. my daughter was younger and didnt realize wut was going on but my ex-fiance..missed me. thank you for that comment. both. i love to write.

    phatdaddee commented on Soul Of A Stripper

    09-05-2009

    Painful and pure but soiled and gritty, this poem is harsh and quite ugly yet poetically pretty!!! Good job!
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    Rygar commented on Soul Of A Stripper

    08-30-2009

    a very lonely picture is painted with your words. u did a great job conveying your emotions with this piece. good job!
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    SammyBoo21

    08/31/2009

    thank you very much. i feel like im always lonely. but i always see the good things out and just wait for my turn. my emotions i feel are running thin. like i dont have any more. like theres a hole in my heart. thank you

    Alone commented on Soul Of A Stripper

    08-12-2009

    It is horrible the decisions people are put through during the hard times in life. Just remember that your past doesnt make you a bad person now. When it comes to that "one thing" most wil do anything and to me that good intention is what counts.
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    SammyBoo21

    08/23/2009

    thank you. ur right. even though the past cant be undone, i wish it could. if i had one wish to be granted, one blessing to be answered, is to have gone back in time to march. thank you for saying that. not too many people would.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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