?What Suicide?

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    ?What Suicide?

    What does it really mean?
    A really well-planned scheme
    Something like a murder
    Self omitted through the mind
    A person, a stranger, and intruder
    Someone who changed thought you could be more kind
    To that one person
    But then it changed, an arson of the brain
    Making you go insane
    All the pain just flowing away
    As the crimson red runs out of days
    I know I am committing a sin
    But the life I know
    Seems to go so slow
    But I won't do it
    Not even a little bit
    Make this sour life go away
    And I won't have to be put away
    For another painful day

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    FranzJ commented on ?What Suicide?

    11-15-2009

    i believe you truly have to be insane for that split second to committ sucide - i hope you never do because to loose you and your writings is a great loss
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    gallaxy commented on ?What Suicide?

    09-05-2009

    Showing ones pain that can determan whether or not to commit suicide. Some go ahead and others if lucky change their minds.Some day I'd like to give you my views of the matter...............good job on this poem!
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    SammyBoo21

    09/05/2009

    Thank you very much. my best friend growing up killed himself and i had a auntie who killed herself too. to be blunt...ive tried before. but, obviously did not work. Now i have no reason to. Thank you. I would like that...expressing yourself to me.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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