?What Suicide?

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?What Suicide?

What does it really mean?
A really well-planned scheme
Something like a murder
Self omitted through the mind
A person, a stranger, and intruder
Someone who changed thought you could be more kind
To that one person
But then it changed, an arson of the brain
Making you go insane
All the pain just flowing away
As the crimson red runs out of days
I know I am committing a sin
But the life I know
Seems to go so slow
But I won't do it
Not even a little bit
Make this sour life go away
And I won't have to be put away
For another painful day

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FranzJ commented on ?What Suicide?

11-15-2009

i believe you truly have to be insane for that split second to committ sucide - i hope you never do because to loose you and your writings is a great loss

gallaxy commented on ?What Suicide?

09-05-2009

Showing ones pain that can determan whether or not to commit suicide. Some go ahead and others if lucky change their minds.Some day I'd like to give you my views of the matter...............good job on this poem!

SammyBoo21

09/05/2009

Thank you very much. my best friend growing up killed himself and i had a auntie who killed herself too. to be blunt...ive tried before. but, obviously did not work. Now i have no reason to. Thank you. I would like that...expressing yourself to me.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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