Child of Mine

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    Dedicated to my beloved niece, Mia. <3

    Child of Mine

    Times are changing
    Things renew
    Now the world
    Welcomes you
    A new life born
    To lead one day
    It's up to you
    To make your way
    Soon you will grow
    And sprout your wings
    We can only wait
    For what the future brings
    But for right now
    We'll hold you high
    Until the day
    You can fly

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    Franziska commented on Child of Mine

    10-16-2010

    I remember when you wrote this. You should of said and sprout your little devil wings lol Mia is such a little imp lol
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    cheronld commented on Child of Mine

    06-24-2010

    Such a sweet and nice sentiment....a feeling I am sure mothers, fathers, aunts, uncles, and anyone with the blessing of a child...this is truly a nice poem...
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    Maleficent commented on Child of Mine

    10-05-2009

    How sweet and beautiful! Just like your niece, I'm sure!
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    smaffa

    10/06/2009

    Thank you! She is a sweet little devil, lol.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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