Broken Bond

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Broken Bond

Darkness set as sharp as blade
The gloves are off, the gauntlets laid
With wicked tongue I am betrayed
By you, my most dearest friend.
Oh how the good have sunk so low
Years of friendship, nothing to show
Such a stupid thing to let go -
We're fools to let it end.

As we stand, our smiles belie
The tears that stain our cheeks now dry
A bitter growl our battlecry,
And as one we dance again.
But soon we fell upon the ground,
Our blood in crimson pools surround,
Our labored breaths the only sound -
Too late to make amends.

Why's it that we never see
Until they pass, mistakes that be?
Perhaps in another life, we
Can forgive each other yet.
Broken armor in pieces shift,
Lungs burning with strain, heavy, I lift
A hand in parting - death comes swift
With neither pity nor regret.

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Franziska commented on Broken Bond

10-16-2010

Wow, it feels as if I'm there on the battleground watching this sacred embrace between friends. Powerful stuff!

DeepEclipse commented on Broken Bond

07-09-2010

Very creative structure and rhyme scheme. Gives the poem a good polish. Death is extreme in its unbiased, unracist, unjudgemental nature. It truly sees all as equal. [Why's it that we never see Until they pass, mistakes that be?] - This line could never be stated enough. Man's folly to his own end. Beautifully flowing poem. Excellent picture.

EmoAlexis commented on Broken Bond

09-22-2009

This is written so beautiful, the way your words flow, the old time it portrays. just.....wow.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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