Vengence

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Dark inspiration just came to me...

Vengence

Crush my heart and make it bleed -
I have all I will ever need;
The knife you so conveniently placed,
Double-edged and poison laced,
Shall rend your head from shoulders high
And spray your blood to azure sky.
Go ahead and finish your little scheme;
Be fit to sleep sound and dream.
Do enjoy it while it lasts
Because the dice have already been cast,
And it is not in your favor, "friend" -
Everything must come to an end.

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Franziska commented on Vengence

10-16-2010

I love this, hehe. *rubs hands together* You can almost feel the malice and glee.

PoetsofBlood commented on Vengence

12-05-2009

Hun, this poem kicks ass, skillfully written, I really love it, :) Alexia....

Maleficent commented on Vengence

09-29-2009

Fantastic imagery and great flow. Love how it oozes darkness and malice. Really great write!

smaffa

09/29/2009

Thank you!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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