confused

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  • poet4ever101995
  • is shooting tommorrow at another comp.pray for me to do good:)

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mmm this one is really bad sorry ya'll

confused

do i belong here
do they love me or need me
i am lost...
where am i

i dont know these people
or this place or world
you think you've finally figured it all out
then it turns you upside down

you have no where to go
no one to run to
you are left all alone in this dark cruel world
with all the people who care only about them selves

what can we do when we end up here
you run but do you get anwhere?
you hide but you can be seen
you are hopless with no end

you hope and pray for a miracle
and then what comes your way
a little ray of light making you think its over its ok
then it turns dark and again your left all alone where you started

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sammia commented on confused

07-25-2009

poet if you ever wanna talk i am here for you to talk to. I felt the emotions rolling off this poem.

poet4ever101995

07/25/2009

thankyou it feels good to have someone to talk too..

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

poet4ever101995’s Poems (15)

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forget 3
confused 1
lost 2
pain 2
inside finally out 2