you came along

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    • poet4ever101995
    • is shooting tommorrow at another comp.pray for me to do good:)

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    thankyou from the bottom of my heart samantha

    you came along

     just when i thought i was ready to go
    that noone else cared about me
    that no one wanted to give me a shoulder to cry on
    you came along

    you gave me advice
    someone to talk too
    someone to trust
    someone to make me realize i belong in this world

    so from the bottom of my heart i say thankyou sammi
    thankyou for everything
    thankyou for believeing in me
    and opening my eyes

    i could never reapy you what you have payed me
    the hope you have given me
    and the little bit of faith as well
    and the thought that i dont belong in hell

    you came along
    when was about to give it all
    to take my life
    to give up

    thank god that you came
    cam along in my world
    that you were here
    that you cared

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    lonewolf commented on you came along

    01-27-2010

    very sincere and heart felt. yet, i know sammi, and this is exactly the type of person she is. shes very warm hearted and always ready to help someone in need. oh, one more thing poet, she misses you.
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    pinkbutterfly commented on you came along

    07-28-2009

    man it takes alot to say thank you and be sincere....that was beautiful...i thank you to sammia
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    poet4ever101995

    07/28/2009

    thanks!

    sammia commented on you came along

    07-26-2009

    poet you are sweet and you are very welcome. im writing this with tears in my eyes. Just to know that I helped you in some of your darkest hours. You do have a reason to be here on this world. I love it i will be adding this to my favorites.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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