lost

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  • Confusion
    • poet4ever101995
    • is shooting tommorrow at another comp.pray for me to do good:)

    Poem Commentary

    this one isnt tht good.

    lost

    i dont know where i am
    who im with or where i belong
    its not here nore there
    where is it? am i?

    im not accepted
    they dont want me
    they dont love me
    they dont need me

    i am the last in the line
    the flower in the corn feild
    can i escape this
    or shall i deal with it for longer

    what can i do?
    where can i go
    can i go without breaking
    help!

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    sammia commented on lost

    07-25-2009

    poet you can do anything you set your mind to. You are accepted here. You can talk about it sometimes it helps. Good write
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    optimistic commented on lost

    07-23-2009

    Yes it is possible through your words you can release the strain. This was a good write keep up the work.
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    poet4ever101995

    07/23/2009

    really? thankyou!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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