River of Tears

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  • poet4ever101995
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this is dedicated to anyone who has lost a best friend to the evil called death i am sorry and please comment on this poem:)

River of Tears

you stared into my eyes
yours crying a river of tears
slowly whispering you said
this was the biggest of my fears

tears over flowed me eyes
as i tried to comprehend
until you finally cried
i think this is the end

i stood terrified
by that heart breaking news
flashbacks filled my head
as I thought of what i feared to lose

you gave me a hug before you left
as if it would be tha last
you looked into my eyes and said
please dont forget the past

all the good times we had
the laughs and the tears
and ill always remember how you were there
through all of my fears

i love you with all my heart
you said walking away
i fell to my knees
when i began to say

this wont be the end
dont listen toy our fears
you walked away waving
as i cried a river of tears

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Ray37342 commented on River of Tears

09-09-2009

I so know the feelings to this poem. I have been in that position before.

rougepriest commented on River of Tears

08-19-2009

very dramatic but i had no idea what the tears were about except that he was leaving but the reason is unknown to me so it loses some meaning it could be so much more if you give the reader some background on the reason but it has real potential so far hope your not mad

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

poet4ever101995’s Poems (15)

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River of Tears 2
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forget 3
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pain 2
inside finally out 2