moon lit night

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  • poet4ever101995
  • is shooting tommorrow at another comp.pray for me to do good:)

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i had a drean about this. i had it not to long ago and since my parents hit me and hate me in my dream i was loved it was all perfect.. than i woke up and realized it would never come true.

moon lit night

once upon a moon lit night
the stars danced around the moon
they shined thier brightest
they showed thier fullest

the grass was green
the flowers had bloomed
the oceans waves were wispering
once upon a moon lit night

the waves called to me
the winds howled my name
the moon shined its light on me
the stars spelled my purpose

the birds sang a peacefull melody
the wind whisteled through the grass
the sand was warm
once upon a moon lit night

i cant help thinking how everything was perfect
i had all the love and suppport of my family
then everything was flawless
once upon that moon lit night

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Mareann commented on moon lit night

10-22-2009

Simply beautiful poetry, well expressed and well written. Thank you for posting and sharing, mareann

bluewolf commented on moon lit night

08-07-2009

Well writen poem. It intices the reader's imagination to a beautiful night, the moon full with a sky full of stars in backdrop, the peaceful sonds of the tide-I feel like I am at the beach enjoying its beauty. Excellent job!

sammia commented on moon lit night

08-05-2009

This is beautiful April...I love it you are loved and you will have this moon lit night one day. keep writing

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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