somebody take the pain away

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    • poet4ever101995
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    life sucks!

    somebody take the pain away

     i have suffered enough
    i cry everyday
    balme myself everynight
    then cry again

    im tired of the pain
    it has ruined my life
    its hurt me
    inside and out

    its caused me to do stupid things
    so somebody take the pan away
    before it takes my life
    before it turnds ito suicide

    take my pain away
    take it from me now
    i cant take it
    help me

    do you feel my pain
    my mysery
    everything i have been through
    emotional and physical?

    sombody take my pain away
    its slowly taking me
    taking me from this world
    from the people i thought loved me

    so should i leave the pain
    let it take my life or should i call for help
    and say somebody take the pain away?

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    bluewolf commented on somebody take the pain away

    08-07-2009

    A good poem. It speaks volumes of the pain and feelings of disclosure that many young people are feeling in today's society.
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    EricaE commented on somebody take the pain away

    07-28-2009

    Wow I really like this. I'm young and going through some issues so I really understand where you are coming from. Good job
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    poet4ever101995

    07/28/2009

    wow thankyou!

    pinkbutterfly commented on somebody take the pain away

    07-28-2009

    as the tears roll down my face i cant help but to think how someone so young could write of such pain.....this is a good way to channel it and don't let it consume you to the point of suicide...it was a good poem
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    poet4ever101995

    07/28/2009

    thankyou

    poet4ever101995

    07/28/2009

    my poems seem to make alot of people cry

    sammia commented on somebody take the pain away

    07-27-2009

    Poet i feel your pain as i read this. do not let your pain grow to suicide. Im here if u need to talk
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    poet4ever101995

    07/27/2009

    i know u r. its just i am hating my life so much right now... i wish i could meet you.. maybe once i get out of highschool...

    sammia

    07/27/2009

    that would be nice poet. I would love for that to happen

    poet4ever101995

    07/27/2009

    yes me 2 but it will be a while i am just a freshman so it sucks...

    sammia

    07/27/2009

    it will be ok we will meet one day.

    poet4ever101995

    07/27/2009

    and i cannot wait until we do! i am beginning to thik of u as some one like a 3rd parent or bff or something idk wbu?

    bleedingblack28 commented on somebody take the pain away

    07-27-2009

    this poem is very emotional and i speak from personal experiences with these kinds of feelings. I loved it!
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    poet4ever101995

    07/27/2009

    thankyou i love my poem forget you should read that one too all of my poems describe how i always feel thankyou!

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    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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