forget

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    • poet4ever101995
    • is shooting tommorrow at another comp.pray for me to do good:)

    Poem Commentary

    as all of my other poems these explain my life and how i feel.

    forget

     you hurt me
    inside and out
    you said go to hell
    you said that you hated me

    later you said im sorry
    please forget i said that
    i didnt mean it
    i am so sorry

    how can i forget
    how could you think i will forget
    marks go away
    but the pain will forever stay inside of me

    i cannot be helped
    its to late
    we will never be the same
    though i may not say it

    now there is a wall
    becuase i cant forget
    how badly you hurt me
    how much my heart was broken

    so dont ask me to forget
    dont expect me to forget
    i cant or never will i forget
    and dont you forget that

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    bluewolf commented on forget

    08-07-2009

    While this poems needs a little work, it has an important message behind it that is well thought out and overall a good piece.
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    bleedingblack28 commented on forget

    07-27-2009

    love it sooo much! ur an amazing writer and i think we have alot in common. lol.
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    poet4ever101995

    07/27/2009

    thankyou.. i bet we do.. maybe

    sammia commented on forget

    07-25-2009

    Wow poet is is deep and full of emotions. i have tears in my eyes cause i feel ur pain and i wanna help you so if u need to talk about anything you can email me if you want.
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    poet4ever101995

    07/27/2009

    thankyou so much sam... you have made me begin to realize..

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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