inside finally out

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  • poet4ever101995
  • is shooting tommorrow at another comp.pray for me to do good:)

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okay i didnt finish it but people said it was good. it's about... someone i know. please comment!

inside finally out

the girl who always smiled, frowned
the girl who always said keep trying, gave up
the girl who was always there, dissapeared
the girl who always laughed cried

it all changed in one small time span
although it seemed everlasting
the pain will always stay
but can it be hkd back?

she cries in the middle of hte night
wandering what she's gonna do
if she'll be loved tommorrow
or if she will even exist in their world

the questions haunt her day by day
terrified of what's to come
she's let go of all hope and faith
she lost with no direction 

they miss hte girl she used to be
so happy and so fun
nobody knows what really goes on
when she's not at school

she works so hard to not let the pain show
but sometimes she just can't help it
others dont really know and understand
what she goes through from day to hopeless day.

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cliftondurant commented on inside finally out

07-24-2009

yes what inside will finally come out try hard to be true to yourself and be confident no matter what and try to love yourself good poem

poet4ever101995

07/24/2009

me love my self... ya.. right?

Mrpoetry commented on inside finally out

07-23-2009

great poem. ....................................

poet4ever101995

07/23/2009

thankyou. i didnt really think anyone would like it!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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