Dance With Me

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    Dance With Me

    The music will play, the lights, they will shine,

    The students will glitter and the temperature will climb.

    The dance floor will rock with the rhythm and the beat,

    Someone is waiting for me.

    Take my hand, hold me high

    You start left, I'll start right.

    Move your feet, don't look down,

    One, two, three, four, One, two, three, four…

    Here we go, around the floor.

    Imitations of birds, calls from the saxophones,

    Howls from wolves, deep violins moan.

    Spin me 'round, left and right,

    Oh please, won't you, you will,

    Dance with me tonight.

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    EricaE commented on Dance With Me

    07-22-2009

    Really liked it. From a dancer and musican point of view, it just reminded me why I love music. And also as a high school student it spoke alot. Great Job
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    Vonn commented on Dance With Me

    06-02-2009

    i like it. its lyk a slow dance but you don't know who you're dancing with. it gave me the feeling of looking for someone on the dance floor hoping they come to me
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    thoughtsaflame commented on Dance With Me

    06-02-2009

    This is sweet...it reminds me of the butterflies in my stomach at my first dance. Your emotions come thru and your imagery is very poignant. I truly enjoyed this read. Thanks for sharing. :o)
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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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