Goodnight Forever

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    Goodnight Forever

    I float slowly
    into the room that once was mine
    Now the room
    is empty
    My stuff is gone
    No traces of my life
    were left behind
    My family is asleep now-
    they sleep with peaceful minds
    almost, as if, I was never here
    To strangers, I never was
    My mistakes and accomplishments
    have been erased
    Forever I am gone
    The sky is dark and deep and black
    I wish the moon a goodnight
    Goodnight, Goodnight Forever

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    Rygar commented on Goodnight Forever

    11-28-2009

    hmmm, ghosting into your old room.. a haunting write indeed :)
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    itzamateo commented on Goodnight Forever

    08-01-2009

    Wow that's amazing, what amazing feelings of peace love and ascension. I know it makes me want to love you more, better and more sweetly.
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    Dreamer123 commented on Goodnight Forever

    07-31-2009

    this is wonderful lego very well written. amazing. keep it up girlyou have talent this is great. I love the beginning made me read on. to find out what happens after. Great write. God Bless you :D
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    NJay commented on Goodnight Forever

    07-31-2009

    Beautiful. I like the way you started. You carried me along in suspence and it ended amazingly well. I love it. Keep the good work girl.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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