Gone, Out of House, Out of Mind

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    Gone, Out of House, Out of Mind

    Sunlight dripping onto the carpet,
    another mess,
    constantly on hands and knees scrubbing
    manual labor,
    well, its easier than what goes on
    in my mind
    and the sores and callouses left behind,
    well, they are on the inside,
    and far more dangerous.

    The front door,
    the room that used to be mine,
    what is it?
    it's a stranger's door,
    an unrecognizable room,
    it's a forgotten memory
    and yet the subject returns
    to the scene,
    to bend words,
    and pass on premonitions
    that are really just feelings
    Amazing intuition....
    Why.

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    Chelles commented on Gone, Out of House, Out of Mind

    09-18-2009

    wow....I think I gone out of mine lol...I like it though. It was a good read.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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