• Legos12
  • is currently in that state a lot of people call "feels like heaven" <3

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Hehe, i wrote this after I got accepted into my dream school, and after my crush agreed to go to a formal dance with me! yay!! :D lol

Yes

Yesterday seems like years ago,

And last there was no night

For I did not sleep,

Months of tricky decisions made,

Finally made their way to me

Every sun forward now,

I can smile with doubtless mind!

With wide eyes I watched

Through windows like,

My future which with hope I, it unfolds,

A different place, unfamiliar room,

Strangers in which I know not

And the Answer!

Oh, the joyous, wondrous word!

Yes!

They said yes!
He said yes!

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Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Legos12’s Poems (31)

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Pomegranate Tea 1
Someday 3
Embedded 7
A Poor Man's Dance 1
The Real Us, You and Me 6
Goodnight Forever 4
For Daniel 2
Unrelated 2
Bird Boy 3
An American Dream 1
Leaves Fall 1
Day On The Island 1
Alone... 0
If I Go 1
Forever A Fighter 1
Living For Jesus 2
It's Gotta Be 0
Gone, Out of House, Out of Mind 1
Deep Thinking 0
This Is Me 0
Extreme Costs 4
My Words, My Joys 5
The Best Of Friends 3
The Fire 0
Yes 0
An Angel Misunderstood 1
A Midnight Melody 2
One Hood, One View 2
Dance With Me 4
A Violin's Reason 4
Cherry Blossoms 4