The Real Us, You and Me

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    The Real Us, You and Me

    We are not forbidden, 'star-crossd' lovers,
    Neither will you find Cinderella and her prince,
    We are just two,
    just me and you
    We are Young,
    writers and aspiring to save the world,
    hero and heroine

    We are just two,
    just me and you
    We are Celebrated
    by dry thunder storms
    and hallmark cards

    We are just two,
    just me and you
    We are Denied
    by a joking father
    and a confused man

    We are just two,
    just me and you
    We are Connected
    by ravioli pasta
    and dedicated love songs

    We are just two,
    just me and you
    We are Rooted For
    by our dreams
    and by God

    We are just two,
    just me and you
    We are In Love
    unconditionally
    and completley

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    hotgirl commented on The Real Us, You and Me

    08-03-2009

    very touching.and heartwarming.love the words.keep up the good work.
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    WinterFrost commented on The Real Us, You and Me

    08-03-2009

    Lovely poem. I usually do not like love poems at all. But excellent. yorus, Winter
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    mufasa commented on The Real Us, You and Me

    08-03-2009

    Warm and inspiring to others, you walk us through the life of the couple . lovely
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    new4 commented on The Real Us, You and Me

    08-03-2009

    I think this is an excellent poem for a person in love.
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    SilverGirl commented on The Real Us, You and Me

    08-01-2009

    Very nice..great flow.. inspiring message.. nice timing. Keep up the good work Hugs SG.. xo
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